Here is the Girl Online file my focus group viewed:
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Feedback
Question asked: How easy is the navigation through Girl Online?
Feedback:
- Overall users were happy with the navigation, they liked the different pathways and options they could pick and said it kept them interested - they also said it made them want to explore the piece again and again.
- There were a few issues they noted with the navigation which they explained futher down.
Feedback:
- Yes, users all agreed that the interface did what they expected it to. They noted that they particularly liked the beginning where they could enter their names as it added a "personal touch".
Feedback:
- On the phone scene there were too many images, users were confused on where they could go and what they could click on.
- They also said that the diary scene was puzzling as there were many arrows, they said they were unsure on what arrow did what.
Feedback:
- All participants said they liked the visual style - they noted that the collaging was fun and interesting and they liked the simplifying of images.
- However, it was noted that in some places the visual style was different (for example - buttons and links sometimes looked different on different pages). They said that this caused my project to lack consistency.
Feedback:
- All users agreed that more sound was needed - sound effects to add interest but also ambient sound to set the scene and mood.
Other feedback received:
- Bedroom scene "lacked interest" and it was mentioned that users couldn't tell the gender of the protagonist from the bedroom - it was only until they opened the diary that they knew the main character was a girl.
- End scene of voicemail & phone looked a little out of place and one participant mentioned that they "didn't understand the relevance" of it. Participants noted that it would be better to get rid of the scene and leave the ending on a cliff-hanger.